Talk:Easter Oratorio/GA1

GA review

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Nominator: Gerda Arendt (talk · contribs) 23:18, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Reviewer: 750h+ (talk · contribs) 08:56, 2 April 2025 (UTC)

I'll review this @Gerda Arendt:. Ping me in 4-5 days if I haven't responded. 750h+ 08:56, 2 April 2025 (UTC)

Thank you. I'll begin the publication section today ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 09:11, 2 April 2025 (UTC)

@750h+: Do you plan on returning to this?--Launchballer 02:29, 12 April 2025 (UTC)

I do but Gerda said on my talk page that she needed some time to add a section, so i'm giving her that time 750h+ 04:54, 12 April 2025 (UTC)

lead

• the Easter Oratorio, when he wrote comma is not needed

  removed --GA

history

• an interaction of two shepherds ==> "an interaction between two shepherds"

  taken --GA

• made it well suited for ==> "made it well-suited for"

  taken --GA

• Both share the same metrical pattern, to use the arias and the chorus without modifications ==> "Both share the same metrical pattern that uses arias and the chorus without modifications"
• Easter cantata basically at it was ==> "Easter cantata basically as it was"

music

• arias in which they express emotional reaction ==. "arias in which they express emotional reactions"

  clarified differently --GA

• and the closing chorus, correspond to movements remove the comma

  don't see where --GA

• exchanged the solo instrument to flauto traverso ==> "exchanged the solo instrument for the flauto traverso"

  taken --GA

• always for two voices, first tenor and bass singing ==> "always for two voices, first for tenor and bass singing"

  taken --GA

• fade away, you cares), to which ==> "fade away, you care), to which"

  it's a quote, and "Sorgen" is plural in German --GA

• that illustrate in the secular work laughter and mirth. ==> "that illustrate the secular work laughter and mirth."

  sentence re-ordered --GA

• disciples Simon and John running to the ==> "disciples Simon and John ran to the "

  taken --GA

• angel told her that Jesus was risen ==> "angel told her that Jesus has risen"

  taken --GA

• believe that Jesus is risen ==> "believe that Jesus has risen"

  taken --GA

• Sanctus composed for Christmas 1724 and later ==> "Sanctus composed for Christmas 1724 and the later"

  (unsolicited comment) Correct me if I'm wrong Gerda, but I think this should be "composed for Christmas 1724 and later made part", as I think "composed for Christmas 1724 and the later part" would imply that the Sanctus and the movement of the B minor Mass were separate pieces (or that the Sanctus was composed "for" the part of the Mass, which doesn't quite work grammatically). – Michael Aurel (talk) 08:46, 12 April 2025 (UTC)

  you are right --GA

manuscripts and publication

• parts again in 1743, and added a new remove the comma

  done --GA

@Gerda Arendt: that's all and feel free to refuse my suggestions with justification. 750h+ 08:07, 12 April 2025 (UTC)

mostly taken, with thanks --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:11, 12 April 2025 (UTC)

happy to pass, sorry the delay. 750h+ 02:15, 13 April 2025 (UTC)

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